The table represent information regarding opening date, route network & number of travellers serve annually by underground train systems of six cities.
Overall, London has the oldest and extensive underground railway system whereas, Tokyo has the busiest system.
To begin with, the oldest underground train system is in London which opened in 1863 & it is the largest system with 394Kms of track. Followed by, railway system of Paris. It started in 1900 & it's track size is almost half of London but, it serves 419 more commuters than London. Interestingly, Tokyo's railway system serve maximum passengers however, in comparison to London & Paris it has smaller route at 155kms.
Moving to other three cities, Washington DC opened in 1976 & it has more extensive route network in comparison to Kyoto & Los Angeles with 126kms. Surprisingly, Kyoto serves least number of passengers annually as compared to other five cities with 45 commuters only. Following this, the newiest network of Los Angeles which was built in 2001 has 28kms of track & it can carry 50 passengers per year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, regarding, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26162790698 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66983000581 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1332103886 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211119543276 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985499347515 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899985353557 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156212304085 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864430464789 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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