The table below gives information about the values (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
The given chart illustrates the differences between the income that New Zealand earned from exporting kiwi to 5 distinctive nations in the 2-year period
Overall, Japan was the largest market of New Zealand’s kiwi fruit, while people in Saudi Arabia did not really expenditure this fruit much
Remarkably, Japan, which was witnessed to be the most kiwi-consumed country in the chart, also possed the most significant rise when gainning more $54,2 million from 2010 to 2012. Followed by the second biggest market, China, with $74,9 million in 2010 and $94 million in 2012, which also a dramatical change of $19,1 million, less than that figure of Japan $35,1 million.
Mexico and Saudi Arabia share the common when these are only 2 markets registered a decline in theirs values of exports, dropping respectively $2,7 million and $208,000. Moreover, the least value of exporting this sort of fruit allocated to Saudi Arabia, with none of surveyed years it got more than $500,000. Otherwise, New Zealand’s kiwi export values to Russia witnessed a slight incease of $1,432 million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, second, so, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13714285714 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59827258157 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662857142857 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.309354044 43.030603864 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.8 112.824112599 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 5.23603664747 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253689529305 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129420861526 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972496721103 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157626894391 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388962757877 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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