The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he IELTS General Test in 2010 Overall,it is evident from the glimpse of the tabl...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , Indoneasian
...lue followed by French and Malay.whereas,Indoneasian had least value. Scrutinizing the fa...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
...by French and Malay.whereas,Indoneasian had least value. Scrutinizing the facts furthe...
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Suggestion: , In
...value. Scrutinizing the facts further,In case of overall, the average band score...
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Suggestion: Moving
...eas,French6.4 had occupied last postion.Moving on speaking, German6.1 had grratest val...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
...ench6.5 and Malaya6.0.whereas,french6.6 had least value.Throwing light on writing,Malaya6...
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...ya6.0.whereas,french6.6 had least value.Throwing light on writing,Malaya6.3 outnumberd g...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...iting,Malaya6.3 outnumberd german6.4 and indonesian6.7.while,french6.6 had minimu...
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Suggestion: , In
...ch6.6 had minimum value. Moving further,In case of Reading Malaya6.4 had greatest ...
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Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the greatest'.
Suggestion: had the greatest
...ng further,In case of Reading Malaya6.4 had greatest value followed by german6.3.Surprisingl...
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Suggestion: Surprisingly
...ad greatest value followed by german6.3.Surprisingly,French and indoneasian shared same valu...
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Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , French
...value followed by german6.3.Surprisingly,French and indoneasian shared same value 6.1.o...
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... shared same value 6.1.on the other hand,In Listening, german6.6 dominated malaya6....
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Suggestion: Amazingly
...istening, german6.6 dominated malaya6.2.Amazingly,French and indoneasian shared same valu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , French
... german6.6 dominated malaya6.2.Amazingly,French and indoneasian shared same value 6.3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.81203007519 4.92477711251 138% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.29703383709 2.65546596893 199% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3983618019 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 302.0 112.824112599 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.3333333333 22.9334400587 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.23603664747 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262844361576 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208526915202 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.2456090221 0.0843802449381 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241468718299 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.269438748456 0.0819641961636 329% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 13.2329268293 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.44 61.2550243902 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.3012195122 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 23.11 11.4140731707 202% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.92 8.06136585366 135% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.4329268293 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.0658536585 217% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.