The table describes the persisted of the consumer such as telephone and refrigerator that is used by British people between 1972 to 1983.
As can be seen in the table, there is proportion of household things which were used by Britain from 1972 to 1983. Moreover, in 1972,central heating had been used and television was the most durable in 1972. Apart from, dishwasher and video which were no introduced by British people in 1972 and later came from 1979 and it was over period of time by 1983 respectively. What is more, in 1983,television had been used more compared to another usability as well as dishwasher used very less throughout the time.
It is clearly seen that in 1972,93% of British people consumed with television whereas 37 percent of British people used central heating which was surged rapidly in 1983. Moreover, percentage of television were look out throughout the year by 96% and slightly increase about 1 % from 1976 to 1982 respectively while a significant proportion of the Britain individuals used refrigerator and washing machine and that was increased by majority of people at 94% and by four-fifths in 1983.
As it is observed, over a period of time in 1983,the number of consumer durable with television at 98%. Significantly, compared with 1972, video and dishwasher later expected with 18% and one in twenty respectively but vacuum cleaner which was utilized by consumer with 87 percent and it was the highest peak about 95% and that was suddenly disappeared in 1983. Likewise, telephone had been wished by families from minor percent of 42 which was drastically plummeted of 77 percent in 1972 to 1983 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nd later came from 1979 and it was over period of time by 1983 respectively. What is more, in ...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...983. Moreover, percentage of television were look out throughout the year by 96% and...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ths in 1983. As it is observed, over a period of time in 1983,the number of consumer durable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, moreover, well, whereas, while, apart from, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89712600855 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483636363636 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4879688365 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176693437267 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948653594661 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573424943743 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143856094337 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610285386368 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.