The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table reveals data on the percentage of unemployed men and women in UK who pass their time performing various activities during last year.
Generally speaking, combining morning and afternoon, women spend a total of 70% of their time doing housework. On the other hand, men dedicate 22% of their mornings to job hunting and 14% to Watching TV in the afternoon.
Notably, men and women pass 8% of their mornings by staying in bed. Activities like gardening, TV, Decorating, Walking, Sitting around, reading, playing sports and drinking amount to 20% of women's morning hours. Clearly, after job hunting men spend most of their morning time shopping followed by housework and gardening.
Amount of time women dedicated to playing sports and staying in bed after 12pm is zero, while men on the other hand spend four and one percent respectively. While men spend 13% of their afternoons gardening, women contribute only 3% to this activity. Men and women spend almost equal amount of time job hunting in the afternoon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of time job hunting in the afternoon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05325443787 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61198204326 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7316232197 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106711095193 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574264576686 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609590290956 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935047820394 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074477150325 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.