The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the changes that have taken place in the population of New Zealand divided into various age groups in the two years 2011 and 2012. Overall, in both two years, the total people who were living in this country were over 4 million. Additionally, over-65-year-old people had the lowest number, while those were in the range 15 to 39 years old accounted the most.
Looking deeper at the table, ranked in the last position in both 2011 and 2012, people in the ages of over 65 increased by 4% in 2012, compared with 2011's figure, which were over 573 thoudsand in 2011 and 596 thousand in 2012. Also witnessed an upward in its data, there were over 1.331 million citizens staying in New Zealand, which increased in 2012 by 0.6% to 1.339 million people.
Regarding those were under 40 years old, it is observed that there was a small decline in percentage of people living in the country, particularly decreased by 0.2%. In details, over 898 thousand people was reported to live in New Zealand were in the range of under 15 years old in 2011, and this figure declined to 896 thousand in the next year. Being observed to have a downward trend in the total number of people, those figures were 1.577 million and 1.574 million people belonging to the group 15 - 39 years old, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...dsand in 2011 and 596 thousand in 2012. Also witnessed an upward in its data, there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65800865801 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45179446041 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549783549784 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8259682353 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117854923435 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638281273506 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737030674418 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091990657439 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297135663242 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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