The table below shows the number of visitor to ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. the charts shoes the result of serving asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the same period
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant
the table reveals information about number of visitors to ashdown museum Meanwhile the year before and after refurbishment. and also pair of Pie Charts depict conclusion of analysis of tourist satisfaction.
in the table it display 74000 visit him before refurbishment and it increased to 90000 after refurbishment during the year to year to ashdown museum. it shows hike of visitor due to renew of museum.
the first pie chart to lose 5 level analysis of satisfaction of visitors. before reconstruction 45 percentage of visitors who are satisfied with Museum out of which 15 percentage were satisfied and 13 % were only satisfy.half of visitors were dissatisfied Museum in which 40% visitor only dissatisfied and rest of visitor were highly dissatisfied. 5% visitor did not give their response.
furthermore, second pie chart describing about satisfaction of tourist after renovation. The ratio of satisfied and very satisfied were 40% and 35% respectively.To add to this, 15% visitors were dissatisfied and only 5% were very dissatisfied.
The ratio of no response became same as before refurbishment.
To conclude it, percentage of dissatisfaction were decrease. However, ratio of satisfaction were increased about 20 percentage in after refurbishment as compared to before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54822335025 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38632879862 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.1348779314 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0833333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385296507652 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129942060476 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974621903795 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188127383279 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101581626594 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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