The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first table indicates the number of audiences visiting the Ashdown Museum one year before and one year after it was revamped. The two pie charts reveal the data of how pleasure people feel when they visited the museum in those two years according to an investigate.
It is of note that the number of people who visited the museum dramatically rose from 74,000 to 92,000 people after the refurbishment. This significant change was 18,000 people, equivalent to the increase of more than 24%.
Obviously, visitors’ satisfaction increases vastly in both degrees of very satisfied and satisfied. The numbers show that the proportion of extremely satisfied visitors from 15% to 35%. The same trend can be seen from people who responded they were satisfied with the museum, from 30% to 40%. In contrast, the numbers of respondents who were not satisfied with the museum substantially fell from 40% to 15% and from 10% to 5% for dissatisfied and very dissatisfied visitors respectively.
Overall, the number of visitors to the Ashdown Museum and the proportion of people who satisfied with the museum were both sharply increased one year after the refurbishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... museum in those two years according to an investigate. It is of note that the number of p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17368421053 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92779686109 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3081671383 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354375223316 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151960862823 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835261310496 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216812379828 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942426406513 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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