The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The statistics display the changes in numbers of visitors and in visitor satisfaction during the year before and the year after the refurbishment of Ashdown Museum.
Overall, after the refurbishment of the museum, the increases in the number of visitors and in the proportion of visitors who felt from satisfied to very satisfied were easily observed.
With regard to the numbers of visitors, during the year before the refurbishment, there were 74,000 people visiting the museum and the figure of the year after was higher, being 92,000 visitors.
As far as the visitor satisfaction is concerned, in the year before, the percentage of the visitors who felt very satisfied was 15%, being a half and over a third of the groups being satisfied and dissatisfied, respectively. The very dissatisfied visitors were double the group without response with respective figures being of 10% and 5%.
After the refurbishment, the very satisfied and satisfied groups each took over a third of total visitors surveyed with respective percentages being 35% and 40%. The figures of the dissatisfied and the very dissatisfied groups were 15% and 5%, respectively, while the one of group having no response stayed the same with that in the year before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
third, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16915422886 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96130670358 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437810945274 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.5413560719 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.428571429 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335875657252 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182674583238 0.103423049105 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103460323598 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227478390127 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926092601 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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