The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table reveals the quantities of people who visited Ashdown Museum between the year before and that after the refurbishment, while the two pie charts suggest visitor satisfaction according to surveys conducted to accumulate their responses by 4 degrees. As a whole, it is noticeable that by renovating this museum, it attracted more people and gained better feedbacks from its visitors.
Before the refurbishment, the amount of visitors was 74,000, and half of them were not so satisfied with the museum, with 40% of overall visitors voting ‘Dissatisfied’ and 10% of those ‘Very dissatisfied’. However, there were still 45% of visitors describing the museum as meeting their expectations, and within this kind of samples, those satisfied (30%) were twice as those very satisfied (15%).
By comparison, after the renovation of the museum, not only visitors increased by 18,000 up to 92,000, but their comments on it were also improved. It is notable that exactly three quarters of them expressed their satisfaction, combined ver satisfied group (35%) and merely satisfied group (40%). What is more impressive is that only 5% were extremely dissatisfied with be newly refurbished museum and its proportion decreased by half compared with former situation.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-04-16 | ochirvaani | 35 | view |
| 2019-07-26 | Saritha Sreejesh | 89 | view |
| 2019-04-10 | zhouhaibo | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, while, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47208121827 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30997942937 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61421319797 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5273021549 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284830402654 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120401162325 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770219809475 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184643528907 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317018591452 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.