Given is a table explain about the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
From tabular column ,we can say six different types of households are given.those are single aged person,aged couple,single with no children,couple with no children,sole parent,couple with children.
Overall,more than 1.83 million people are facing poverty in Australia.Mainly couple with children type had approximately one million people under poverty.However ,out of six categories sole parent had highest proportion with 21%, follows with singles with out children had 19%,couple with children had 12%, remaining single aged,aged and couple without children had 6%,4%and 7% respectively.
We can conclude in the given all types sole parents had highest proportion and aged couple facing less poverty among all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88617886179 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29387712962 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626016260163 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.567852471 43.030603864 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.0 112.824112599 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174347557477 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201354445311 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.258170576186 0.0843802449381 306% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201354445311 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258170576186 0.0819641961636 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.2329268293 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 11.4140731707 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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