The supplied table depicts the results about the survey held regarding number of people of various ages took part in different cultural programs in the last dozen months. Overall, dancing, singing, playing musical, instruments, and acting had the highest participates while the computer-based activities had the least number of joiners among 1600 participates.
To embark, any performance which includes dancing, singing, playing musical instruments, and acting were mostly popular activities that people aged 16-44 enjoy with 35% for aged 16-24 and 22% for 22-44 old. While undertaking any crafts participates were around 20% for aged 45-74 and 16 and above. Any visual arts participants were 30% for age 16-24 and other aged participated were around 15%. Computer based and any writing events joiners were nearly 5% for all age groups except for 16-24 old. Undertaking any crafts and cultural purchases were the only activities with increasing participants as age increases whilst the remaining other events had a declining scale of participates as they become old. It is clear from the evidence that age plays a significant role in the popularity of the cultural activities listed.
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. 84
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. 78
- Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Both government and individuals are spending too much money protecting animals and their habitat. This money should be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?
- Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magzines to what extent do you agree or disagree 42
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41081081081 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81732094325 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9869774001 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193102717857 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096928321969 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052342739955 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168672354135 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366686120037 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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