The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given table reveals a clear difference in city sports club preferences for the variety of activities, club amenities, and opening time between female and male members of the sports club.
In general, while females generally expressed satisfaction with the opening hours, males were more inclined towards the availability of club facilities.
Looking at the range of activities offered, female members demonstrated a relatively even distribution of opinions across all three levels of enjoyment, with scores falling roughly between 35% and 30%. In contrast, males strongly endorsed the variety of activities, with over half expressing high satisfaction.
In terms of facilities and opening hours, a significant majority of over 60% of members were perfectly pleased with the equipment, with only a small minority (10% to 14%) expressing dissatisfaction. Regarding opening hours, females show a strong preference, with 72% indicating great liking. This stands in stark contrast to the male members, where satisfaction and dissatisfaction levels are roughly equal, hovering around 40%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7950310559 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09921083949 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6302390656 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.285714286 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15018664151 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067675766056 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800025930528 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103506358564 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878207423601 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 61.2550243902 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 11.4140731707 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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