The table below shows the sales made by a cofee shop in an office building an a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reportig rhe main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below illustrates the sales made by a coffee shop in typical weekday in an office building. Overall, it can be seen that the greatest change and fluctuation was in the either three and four hours of workaday. Moreover, coffee is the highest achievement in seliing. In contrast, tea has a few consumer in this store.
In the first three hours, coffee stand handles 700 order by buyer for 265 coffee, 110 tea, 275 pastries and 50 sandwiches. In the next season of four hours, employee execute more commission than the earlier time for 430 among others 200 sandwiches as the most ordered. Following this, coffee in the second popular to be reserved which got 185. Beside that, tea and pastries has a slight interested in this moments finish at 50 and 95 ordering.
In the next six of clock, all of carte at this coffee stall go through up and reach over for 735 customer. coffee are favourites for them rather than times before at 345, next there 230 pastries sold, sandwich in third position which extended of 150, ultimately, tea is the extremely lower menus are sold.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun consumer seems to be countable; consider using: 'few consumers'.
Suggestion: few consumers
...ment in seliing. In contrast, tea has a few consumer in this store. In the first three ho...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...10 tea, 275 pastries and 50 sandwiches. In the next season of four hours, employee...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...and pastries has a slight interested in this moments finish at 50 and 95 ordering. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'customer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'customers'.
Suggestion: customers
...ll go through up and reach over for 735 customer. coffee are favourites for them rather ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Coffee
...ugh up and reach over for 735 customer. coffee are favourites for them rather than tim...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, so, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71578947368 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43055344062 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673684210526 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4395945926 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0731539058144 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411037333454 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123311200036 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650167497426 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919475692674 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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