The given table illustrates the amount of coffee, tea, pastries and sandwiches sold in a coffee shop located in an office building at different periods of a weekday.
Overall, 7:30 to 10:30 is the time when the goods are consumed the most but from 14:30 to 17:30, the sales become the lowest. Additionally, the shop's customers prefer coffee to a cup of tea according to the statistics.
At the first glance, the sales made by the coffee shop fluctuated in different time frames. In the morning, the sales are the highest, which is 700 products sold in total. From 10:30 to 14:30, the figures decrease to 430, and in the next 3 hours, the figures drop to 400, which are the lowest compared to others. In the evening, the sales slightly increase to 465.
At a second glance, tea products do not interest customers as coffee products do. On this weekday, the total sales of tea are 270, nearly three times lower than coffee's sales( 795). Besides, sales of sandwiches and pastries are also considerable, 500 and 590 respectively.
- The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77094972067 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56677009672 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4561599691 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265674546395 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104418974837 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923117366173 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167732004532 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850409326855 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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