the table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in official building on a typical weekday

Essay topics:

the table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in official building on a typical weekday

the table illustrates the coffee shop on a typical weekday in four times around 07:30 PM to 08:30 AM. it is evident coffee was the best order in the morning which is 265 customers on average has at least 150 more higher than tea, and pastries was 275 in the morning more than quarter from sandwich. 10:30 to 02:30 is also ahead in customers value, with 185 order coffee and 200 sandwich.

On the afternoon, however, coffee as drink are almost equal value with pastries as food higher than tea and sandwich. meanwhile, in the evening coffee was 200, almost half than tea which is only 75 and sandwich was 110 higher 90 than pastries.

overall, it is clear that the coffee in shop most popular than tea on a weekday, especially for breakfast and dinner. On the other hand, pastries was higher than sandwich for breakfast and lunch, sandwich only poplar in the afternoon.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the table illustrates the coffee shop on a ...
^^^
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sandwich' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sandwiches'.
Suggestion: sandwiches
...rs value, with 185 order coffee and 200 sandwich. On the afternoon, however, coffee a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...s as food higher than tea and sandwich. meanwhile, in the evening coffee was 200, almost ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sandwich' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sandwiches'.
Suggestion: sandwiches
...most half than tea which is only 75 and sandwich was 110 higher 90 than pastries. ove...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...ich was 110 higher 90 than pastries. overall, it is clear that the coffee in shop mo...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, at least, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64516129032 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29360056199 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9885183483 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123355032515 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734919616247 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756903590859 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882646264887 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370351247624 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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