The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday
The wide variety of food and drinks made by the office's coffee shop divided into four different times on weekdays is presented on the table.
As it observed, consumers have a tendency to purchase all of the forms of menu except sandwiches in the morning whilst coffee sales are the largest at the end of the day.
In the early morning, pastries sales are the most favorite food and drinks followed by coffee and tea make up 275, 265, and 110 respectively while the sales of sandwiches show the lowest number during this time. However, at 10.30-14.30 coffee sales have nearly a similar proportion with the sales of sandwiches constituate by 200 while two other menus presented just under one hundred.
The sales of pastries and coffee at 14.30-17.30 illustrate 150 and 145 severally contrast to tea and sandwiches sales are below 50 at the same time. In the evening, sandwiches sales have just half of coffee sales at 200, while pastries and tea sales have almost equal numbers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'offices'' or 'office's'?
Suggestion: offices'; office's
... variety of food and drinks made by the offices coffee shop divided into four different...
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Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
..., consumers have a tendency to purchase all of the forms of menu except sandwiches in the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84023668639 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48784025058 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.3541587332 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103895379782 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662055330771 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062155216724 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837050994488 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690072926125 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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