The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district

Essay topics:

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.

The given table provides information about tha sales of a small restaurant which is situated in a downtown business area during the lunch and dinner times of the week from 7 to 13 October ( Monday to Sunday).

As we can tell from the table, while the higest revenues can observe during dinner time compared to the total sales for lunch time.

According to information given, it is a evident that during the lunch time, the restaurant earned the greatest revenues at the beginning of three week. The sales for this weeks were from $ 2.400 to $ 2.595 respectively. The lowest sales shows on Sunday ( just over $ 1.550) compared to the general proceeds on Saturday. On Thursday and Friday earnings experiences as similar as about $ 2.375 and $ 2.500 respectively.

On the other hand, a major sales during dinner time clearly shows that, the proceed is the higest on Friday with $ 4350. On Thusday comes with a signaficant amount of $ 3.850. After then, the total sales on Monday was $ 3. 623 just $ 177 lower than Thursday. Lastly, the lowest earnings for lunch and dinner time were both on Sunday hitting $ 1.550 and $ 2.450 respectively, compared to the total revenues on Saturday.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r times of the week from 7 to 13 October Monday to Sunday. As we can tell fro...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... According to information given, it is a evident that during the lunch time, the...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...test revenues at the beginning of three week. The sales for this weeks were from $ 2...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... beginning of three week. The sales for this weeks were from $ 2.400 to $ 2.595 resp...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...eek. The sales for this weeks were from $ 2.400 to $ 2.595 respectively. The lowest...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...les for this weeks were from $ 2.400 to $ 2.595 respectively. The lowest sales show...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tively. The lowest sales shows on Sunday just over $ 1.550 compared to the genera...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
...lowest sales shows on Sunday just over $ 1.550 compared to the general proceeds on...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...arnings experiences as similar as about $ 2.375 and $ 2.500 respectively. On th...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...riences as similar as about $ 2.375 and $ 2.500 respectively. On the other hand...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... during dinner time clearly shows that, the proceed is the higest on Friday with $ 4350. On...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$4350'.
Suggestion: $4350
...he proceed is the higest on Friday with $ 4350. On Thusday comes with a signaficant am...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed is the higest on Friday with $ 4350. On Thusday comes with a signaficant amount...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
...sday comes with a signaficant amount of $ 3.850. After then, the total sales on Mon...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
...ter then, the total sales on Monday was $ 3. 623 just $ 177 lower than Thursday. La...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$177'.
Suggestion: $177
...total sales on Monday was $ 3. 623 just $ 177 lower than Thursday. Lastly, the lowest...
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Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
...dinner time were both on Sunday hitting $ 1.550 and $ 2.450 respectively, compared ...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...were both on Sunday hitting $ 1.550 and $ 2.450 respectively, compared to the total...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, then, thus, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92424242424 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53947565623 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550505050505 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2424152823 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178899232722 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633903903811 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706944793127 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119653972232 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082259978131 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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