The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table represents the revenues for every lunch or dinner, during
the days of the week of October 7th-13th.
Overall, it can be noticed that the more significant amount of cash flow comes in at dinner, especially on Friday. The weekend registers the lowest numbers since the businesses are closed on that period.
During weekdays, regarding lunch, the data shows consistent values, averaging around $2,500 per day. The most lucrative date is on Wednesday, reaching $2,595 of goods sold. However, on Saturday and Sundays the small restaurant bottoms its values, with Sunday being the worse day with just $1,550 worth sold.
On the other hand, dinner is constantly more cost-efficient than lunch, reporting at least a $1,000 more every day. From the data in can be seen that the peak value reached on Friday, at $4,350, almost the double of any lunch earnings.
As for the weekend, the situation is about the same as the noon one, so its income is lower compared to weekdays, although it still more significant than the lunch one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, still, as for, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46441448939 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.241518324 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762900597886 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030298860889 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0184600788687 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0332644582755 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241763388658 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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