The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country in millions

Essay topics:

The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions.

The table depicts the number of television viewers of 4 different sports: Tennis, golf, moto racing and athletics in 4 countries namely Australia, UK, US and Canada.
Overall, tennis and golf received the most viewers from 4 countries. Besides, UK and USA citizens paid more attention to 4 sports named in the table than the others.
As can be seen from the figures, while citizen from Australia, UK and Canada refer to watch tennis than others sport ( 6.2 million, 6.6 million, 6.1 million respectively), people in USA like golf the most which figured at 11.2 million. This figure also the highest calculation for all sport reported. Although the figure for USA viewer highest at golf, the number of USA watch tennis is 7 million which is also the highest compared to other countries within tennis.
Moreover, moto racing received the least viewers in total and Canadian pay the least attention to this sport which account for only 1.1 million viewer. The UK people don’t watch golf as much as they do with other sports(2.8 million viewers) while just 1.5 million USA viewers watch moto racing which is also the shortest figure for this countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9587628866 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39235239546 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2121872943 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136185962755 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778177312619 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505155044601 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884021579774 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156934655912 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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