The table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 2000

Essay topics:

The table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 2000.

The table above shows the sales figures of fiction, non-fiction and magazine books in a university bookshop in February 2000. These figures can be divided into two groups: non-book club and book club members.

it can be seen in the non-book club members category that magazines(1249) had the highest numbers of books in the students group, which was followed by college staff (332) and members of public(82). compared with fiction books , non-fiction books were more popular in non-book club members with 194 in college students and 122 in members of public, separately,excepting for college staff, which was 29.

when it comes to book club members, non-fiction books played an significant role in book club members with 942, which was more 12 times than fiction books(76). In contrast with non-book club members, magazines, which was 33, was least likely to be chosen by book club members.

Overall, college students account for the main part of the sales and magazines are the most popular books in this bookshop.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2023-05-31 ililmaidatuz 73 view
2023-05-01 oreooquynh 73 view
2021-02-26 Safarbek 100 view
2018-12-03 Alven 67 view
2018-09-17 Sidhu sangat 40 view

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...non-book club and book club members. it can be seen in the non-book club memb...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...lub and book club members. it can be seen in the non-book club member...
^^
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...magazines1249 had the highest numbers of books in the students group, which was f...
^^
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Compared
...lege staff 332 and members of public82. compared with fiction books , non-fiction books ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of public82. compared with fiction books , non-fiction books were more popular in ...
^^
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re more popular in non-book club members with 194 in college students and 122 in ...
^^
Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , excepting
...and 122 in members of public, separately,excepting for college staff, which was 29. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing for college staff, which was 29. when it comes to book club members, non-...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...llege staff, which was 29. when it comes to book club members, non-fict...
^^^^
Line 13, column 62, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... club members, non-fiction books played an significant role in book club members w...
^^
Line 13, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
... more 12 times than fiction books76. In contrast with non-book club members, magazines, ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to be chosen by book club members. Overall, college students account for th...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26506024096 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70832173743 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6919738363 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788660582102 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574697234619 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647259335854 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732430016371 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495517385859 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.