The table illustrates the percentages of three age groups of spectators watching different TV programs.
Overall, cartoons are more popular with people aged between 11 and 15 while featured films and news programs are preferred by people in the 16-20 and 21-25 age groups.
People aged 11-15 accounts for 29%, compared with 19% of the 16-to 20-year-olds and 4% of the 21-to 25-year-olds. In contrast, around 23% of people in the 16-20 and 21-25 age groups watch featured films, as opposed to only 11% of people in the youngest age group enjoy this program. Similarly, spectators watching news programs in 16-20 and 21-25 age groups are nearly three times as much as that figure of 11-to 15-year-old people, with the figures being nearly 20% and 6% respectively.
It can be seen from the table that TV drama is the least favorite TV program among three age groups, with only 9% of people in the 11-15 age group and approximately 12% in the other groups. While the percentages of spectators watching soap operas aged 16-20 and 21-25 are the same, at 20% each, more than 6% in comparison with the youngest age group, sports program attracts roughly 20% people aged 16-20 and 21-25, which is about 6% more than the figure for 11-to 15-year-olds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (TV) must be used with a third-person verb: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
... that TV drama is the least favorite TV program among three age groups, with only 9% of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8544600939 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55443934197 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2463348796 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.714285714 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190208921624 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118008088014 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498592612991 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145796594494 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380049954767 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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