The table shows the number of cars per 1,000 inhabitants in five European countries, in 1990 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presented the number of cars per 1,000 inhabitants in 1990 and 2009 between five countries in European as Denmark, France, Germany, Spain and UK.
In 1990, France was a country had the most hight number of car per 1,000 inhabitants with 476 cars, whereas Germany had 461 cars, ranked second. The next ranked was Uk with 361 cars and the lowest were Denmark and Spain with only 309 cars in each.
In contrast, in 2009, the ranked first was Germany owned 510 cars while France ranked second with 500 cars. The next position was Spain with 478 cars and UK with 470 cars whereas Denmark had 383 cars, it was a country had lowest cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
... Denmark had 383 cars, it was a country had lowest cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 530.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 117.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52991452991 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01081886428 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 106.607317073 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 134.1 283.868780488 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.4880452948 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174233758014 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125928064827 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113040059733 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17532133196 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119567914392 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.43 61.2550243902 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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