The table illustrate information of distribution of the rooms took up in six hotels during the mid of the year from May to September. The data is divided into six hotels namely Hotel Concorde, Hamilton's, The Tower, Hotel Olivia, Hampton's and The Continental. The data is given between 1985 and 2000 and the span of years is fifteen. The data is calibrated in numbers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
The table illustrate information of distribution of the rooms...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l Olivia, Hamptons and The Continental. The data is given between 1985 and 2000 and...
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... 2000 and the span of years is fifteen. The data is calibrated in numbers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 304.0 965.302439024 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 64.0 196.424390244 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.82842712475 3.73543355544 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72717802866 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 41.0 106.607317073 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 94.5 283.868780488 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3446093053 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282290141654 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135208789059 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961736787542 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282290141654 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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