The table shows source of student income over ten year period in the United Kingdom
Write a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table shows the the trend which took place in student income in the United Kingdom during the ten-year period from 1988 to 1999.
Even though the data of student loan is not presented in 1988/89, there was a dramatic increase from 8% in 1992/93 to 24% in 1998/99. The percentage of earnings also rose sharply from 6% in 1988/89 and reached the peak at 14% in 1995/96, then fell slightly by 2% in 1998/99.
On the other hand, there was a steep fall in parental contribution from 32% in 1988/89 to 16% in 1998/99. At the same time, grant went down by 24% from 38% in 1988/89 to 14% in 1998/99.
Overall, the annual income per student rose gradually from 4,39 pounds in 1988/89 to 5.75 pounds in 1998/99, and there was a shift from being dependent to independent off the student at that period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54109589041 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30516850555 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 158.4 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4116129216 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108745438119 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702224704373 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107475466459 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102372479782 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118751131206 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.42 61.2550243902 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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