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The provided table represents the total number of visitors, who visited to Ashdown Museum and the pie charts illustrate an overview of the satisfaction ratio of the people for after and before refurbishment of the museum.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the higher number of people visited to the museum after refurbishment compared to before refurbishment. In addition, a significant number of people were 'very dissatisfied' before refurbishment; whereas, it was "satisfied" after refurbishment.
Total 74,000 people visited at the Ashdown museum during the year before refurbishment. At that time, the greatest number of people were "dissatisfied"and it was 40 people, while, 30 people were "satisfied". Moreover, the number of people, who were very satisfied and very dissatisfied was 15 and 10 people respectively. Only 5 people were not responded in the survey.
On the other hand, 92,000 people visited to the museum during the year after refurbishment. At the same time, the highest number of people were "satisfied" and it was 40; in contrast, 15 people were "dissatisfied".The number of very satisfied people were 35. Additionally, the number of very dissatisfied and No response were equally and it was 5 persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...15 people were 'dissatisfied'.The number of very satisfied people were 35...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62371134021 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.2495240523 2.65546596893 160% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438144329897 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4875241686 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0175634830108 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00849142319036 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0108188532073 0.0843802449381 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0135524720191 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00783504604014 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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