The line graph illustrates the proportion of people who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions inhabited in Australia between 1976 to 2011.
It is clear that the percentage of people born in Asia increased significantly throughout the period while this figure for the UK had a declining trend.
Starting at about 14% in 1976, the UK had the highest percentage of people living in Australia. However, this figure continuously declined to hit a low of around 5% in 2011. By contrast, the proportion of Asian people living in Australia was at the lowest point at around 3% in 1976. From 1976 to 2011, The native Asians settling down in Australia surged dramatically until reading the peak of 15% in the last year of the period. The other countries saw a considerable fall from 12% to around 7% in the first 10 years before significantly growing in the number of residents living in Australia from about 7% to around 14%.
The total population of Australia took up the highest percentage at about 23% in comparison with that of the UK, Asia and other regions. After falling considerably, Australia saw a significant rise in population to the end of the period before reaching the peak of 20% in the year 2011.
- The table and chart below show the domestic water use and cost in 5 countries 67
- Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have their own disadvantaged people like the homeless and unemployed To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Most university graduates earn more money than less well educated people Some people argue that this means they should pay the full cost of their education To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years
- Some people give more importance to artists painters writers musicians in the current age of rapidly developing technology and science What do you think Do people prefer arts to technology in your views 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...native Asians settling down in Australia surged dramatically until reading the pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73113207547 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78665815775 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514150943396 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6159848715 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341704905579 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151314585923 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128170281869 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235415097754 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106460593614 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.