The given graph depict amount of products which are carried with four vriety of transportation systems in the united kingdom commencing from 1974 until 2002. In general, all four methods of transporting are in a upward trend during the period, which road with substantial increase of nearly double is the outstanding way of transporting system.
As presented in the graph, pipeline mode has a gradual increase to 20 million tonnes from 1974 to approximately 1995. Whereas it levelled out from then until the end of period. Rail and water with steady unchanged state remained in 40 million tonnes until water way selected upward trend to 60 million tonnes while rail system after steep decline tendency untill 1995, came back to commencing point of 40. Road which was the overwhelming portion of 50 million tonnes, had a oscillation trend untill 1995 then with a dramatically rise reached to the summit of 100 million tonnes in final year of 2002.
To conclude, all the methods had a gradual trend from 1974 to 2002.
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 61
- IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 1 - Academic 11
- IELTS 8 Test 3 Writing Task 1 25
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 73
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...all four methods of transporting are in a upward trend during the period, which r...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tonnes from 1974 to approximately 1995. Whereas it levelled out from then until the end...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lming portion of 50 million tonnes, had a oscillation trend untill 1995 then with...
^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
...oscillation trend untill 1995 then with a dramatically rise reached to the summit of 100 million to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97660818713 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64592580414 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4067843196 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0784164221716 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469977209186 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394811550612 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754789886472 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367645555708 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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