The diagram compares about the rates of citizens cross ages who habitually rode a bike in one city in the year 2012.
From basic observation, the proportion of women who usually ride bicycles is always greater than that of men in different age groups. The percentage of the population who ride a bike decline gradually over age groups from birth to age 59. However, from 60 years old and above, the number of bicyclists has risen significantly.
Looking at the table, the group of 0-9 years old is the most proportion of citizens cycling compared to older ages, in which males rode a bike up to 51.2 but still fewer than females 1.3. Cyclists who were women aged 10-19 dropped moderately to 43.6, while the number of men rode bicycles plummeted to 25.1. In addition, the group at 20-39, the rate of women and men continued to plunged considerably to 18.2 and 10.8 respectively.
Besides, the number of cyclists slumped markedly to a minority they reached the age from 40 to 59 years old. However, starting from the age of 60 and above, the percentages of the population cycling surged remarkably, in which males rode a bike up to 14.6 but this figures still fewer than females 5.2.
- The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 61
- The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of east a frica 73
- Some people think that detailed descriptions of crime scenes in newspapers and on TV can have a bad influence on the public so this kind of information should be restricted in the media To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below shows the amount of electricity produced from different energy sources to supply the city of New York between 1980 and 2000 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70673076923 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58890994373 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533653846154 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.108183903 43.030603864 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.857142857 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236421205788 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118722983801 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776510005659 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153446680295 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303141719394 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.