Topic: It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects.
What are causes? And what will be effects on society?
In recent years, we have seen a growing tendency in students not to choose learning science subjects. In this essay I will look at some of reasons, and how it impacts on society and country.
There are several causes why students are not choosing to studying science subjects. First of all, they are not attracted by these subjects which really difficult for them to access knowledge. For example, In Vietnam , almost every students tend to be enrolled English because it is practical and easy to find a good job at big companies. Second of all, If you choose to study science subjects , Time will be limited too much. Therefore, you do not enough time to find a part time job.
Meanwhile, it has negative effects on the development of this country. We can see that country will become lack of many professors about science majors as the results the quality of life will not boost considerably .To use a common example of this practice, Life would be difficult for human to produce newer machine with better functions . Additionally the number of students choosing economic, business to study increase dramatically every year , there are restricted employees to find a suitable job .Consequently, students graduating from universities and colleges will out of job in the future.
All to all, it is clear that students should consider to choose a branch of learning before studying at university so that it could benefit the whole society and people’s well-beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...wing tendency in students not to choose learning science subjects. In this essay I will ...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the reasons') or simply say ''some reasons''.
Suggestion: some of the reasons; some reasons
... subjects. In this essay I will look at some of reasons, and how it impacts on society and coun...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ccess knowledge. For example, In Vietnam , almost every students tend to be enroll...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... If you choose to study science subjects , Time will be limited too much. Therefor...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...efore, you do not enough time to find a part time job. Meanwhile, it has negative effect...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...try. We can see that country will become lack of many professors about science ma...
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Suggestion: .
...lity of life will not boost considerably .To use a common example of this practice...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Suggestion: .
...duce newer machine with better functions . Additionally the number of students ch...
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Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... newer machine with better functions . Additionally the number of students choosing economi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o study increase dramatically every year , there are restricted employees to find ...
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Suggestion: .
...tricted employees to find a suitable job .Consequently, students graduating from u...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider choosing'.
Suggestion: consider choosing
...o all, it is clear that students should consider to choose a branch of learning before studying at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00816326531 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78755942946 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9638483215 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306037180135 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11371880996 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884462329191 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167909840196 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393073550244 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.