The pie-charts given below provide details about the different ages of the population in 2000 and estimated population of different ages in the year 2050 of the countries Yemen and Italy. Yemen suffered an increase in 15-59 age group and decrease in 0-14 age group while Italy estimated a increase in 60+ age group and decrease in 15-59 ages by 2050.
Firstly, Yemen has low population of 3.6% of 60+ age group , but other 0-14 and 15-59 age groups comprised each with 50% i.e., 46.3% and 50.1%. The projected population of 2050 of Yemen comprises of 5.7% of 60+, 37% of 0-14 years and 57.3% of 15-59 ages. There is no much difference in the age group of 60+ but other age groups differed by 7-10%.
Italy has maximum population of 15-59 age group in 2000 with 61.6% but estimated a decrease of nearly 20% and a percent of 46.2 in 2050. Old people with age 60+ comprises 24.1% in 2000 but estimated an increase and 42.3% of 60+ aged people by 2050. Children of 0-14 years didn't suffer much variation, in 2000 they comprised of 14.3% and in 2050 decreased to 11.5% by 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...in 0-14 age group while Italy estimated a increase in 60+ age group and decrease ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... low population of 3.6% of 60+ age group , but other 0-14 and 15-59 age groups com...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...e projected population of 2050 of Yemen comprises of 5.7% of 60+, 37% of 0-14 years and 57.3...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...years and 57.3% of 15-59 ages. There is no much difference in the age group of 60+...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on of 15-59 age group in 2000 with 61.6% but estimated a decrease of nearly 20% a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... people by 2050. Children of 0-14 years didnt suffer much variation, in 2000 they com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52820512821 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34384778708 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430769230769 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0473750966 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179879408142 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105888406049 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441429011823 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148084701722 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325206090323 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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