The two given maps compare the changes in a small island before and after modernizing to become a tourist attraction.
Overall, it is noticeable that the Eastern part of the island remained unchanged, while there were more facilities equipped in the centre and the West.
As can be seen that a number of trees in the East and some in the West were to be still in the same place and there also saw no change in the island’s size.
Apart from that, the island witnessed several significant advancements. To specify, in the south, a pier, which was built for visitors’ access to the island from boats, was consecutive with a vehicle track leading to a reception house and a restaurant in the central zone. Moreover, to both sides of those buildings, there had the presence of new accommodations which connected with each other and with the reception by footpaths. Besides, a path was constructed to the beach in the Western edge where tourists could swim in the sea.
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- The diagrams below show the stages in the development of simple cooking equipment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisos where relevant 78
- writing task 1: the birth rates of China and America 73
- The table below illustrates the percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university between 2000 and 2010. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, still, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74556213018 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72267804489 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0764575403 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220906368957 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926083146279 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969591273943 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135708264521 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105954933453 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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