The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The differences of tourism facilities in the island after and before the construction are illustrated in the maps.

Overall, the developers establish new facilities like Hostels and Footpaths as well as the Restaurant and Office. Nonetheless, the Coconut trees are not removed by the authorities after renovating.

If looking in the western region, 6 new Home-stays are established by the developers, and they established Pave-side where is located around that ones. Also, the Foot-route are connected with Vehicle Roads which have circle shape in the centre area, while there is Reception buildings in the middle, and located in the north the latter constructure is the Restaurant.

In the eastern area, the constructors built more Hostels, accounting for 9, and this area link with each other because there are Side-walk routes which have the same shape as the first region. If the boats come to this island, they can park in the New Port. However, the trees are not cut down by the architects.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1717791411 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83755429975 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613496932515 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8081882569 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11005196445 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595677690441 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101673121492 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104488580741 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127731157277 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.