The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The mentioned maps illustrate an island, which turned into the perfect tourist destination after the development of different tourist facilities.
Overall, as is represented by the maps, there is a drastic change in an island after construction of facilities for tourist, which have become a great place to visit. Not only tourist services are developed but also sea water is also utilized for swimming activities.
It is clear from maps that two accommodations are built for visitors, one lies on the west part, while other resides on centre of an island. Moreover, a circular footpath is constructed around the accommodation. Furthermore, a restaurant is built in the Northern part of an island, which has reception in front of it that has got a circular vehicle track that leads to the restaurant. In addition, the unused sea water before is now utilized for various entertainment purposes such as near the west accommodation a footpath is constructed that leads to the beach, where sea water is used for swimming. Likewise, a pier is built using it visitors can go for sailing in the south sea. Surprisingly, none of the coconut trees are destroyed for constructing facilities for visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14795918367 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07518500373 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9277478731 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183665848287 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784539814622 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652381985228 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149717286764 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504503968027 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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