Both maps display a paradise island, in the past and in the present it was developed for tourism.
Overall, there have been several changes, the most noticeable being the permission of swimming in the sea, scientific research station was disappeared from the map and there were built an hotel complex, moreover the palm trees were cut-down and replaced with a restaurant and a swimming pool.
One change that stands out is that there has been a significant redevelopment over the whole period. In the past there were just a scientific research station, a natural spring and palm trees. Now there are neither palm trees nor scientific research station left, although the natural spring is still there. The pier seaward still stands as it did in the past but it was extended.
Another noticeable change is that was built a cycle path inside the island. Additionally, the palm trees were cleared to make way for a restaurant, a BBQ area and a swimming pool. Moreover, the scientific research station was converted into a complex of hotel. In the past there was a boat to the south-west of the island, but now there is a cruise ship being the same direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...eared from the map and there were built an hotel complex, moreover the palm trees ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82914572864 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6325520018 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.0537468138 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145535987839 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704594791998 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106052353231 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132372843995 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137594186726 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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