The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrates how people can enter the city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010. It is apparent that the map of 2007 differs from that of 2010 mainly in the way intersections are arranged as well as the addition of the bus station and the removal of bus stops.
As we can see, the most visible change is the existence of two roundabouts on Hospital road, which is the main access to the city hospital from 2007 to 2010. Looking ate the other features, we can see that the six bus stops, located along the Hospital road, was replaced in order to make way for the new bus station to the western side of the road. In terms of parking spaces, the original parking lot was divided into two separate parts: the public car park lies on Ring road, which is to the east of the hospital while the staff car park is situated opposite the present bus station.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34355828221 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21554800025 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546012269939 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7968035363 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.6 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272623485187 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165243995237 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894576492939 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222938487623 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131887477763 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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