The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by MaKay1990 on Sat, 11/02/2019 - 12:01

The maps illustrate the changes occurred for the access road to a hospital for 3 years from 2007 to 2010.

The main difference between the maps was adding two roundabouts on two sides of the hospital road. One of them, constructed in junction with the ring road which was circled hospital and another one was built on the other side of the road crossing with city road. Moreover, the six bus stops which distributed on the west and east of hospital road were destroyed and collected on a new bus station on the west of this road.

In addition to those, the previous car parking which was for staff and the public, replaced with two new car parks. The staff car park was located in the same place as ancient parking on the east of the hospital road while people can park their vehicles on the east of the city hospital ring road. People could reach this parking from the entrance on the ring road.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, while, as for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49696969697 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1968338516 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478787878788 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3682479269 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21472592565 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113923688585 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733040919522 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163651839548 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524712361844 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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