The maps illustrate some changes to city hospital’s transport infrastructure in 2007 and 2010.
It is noticeable that there are three modifications made to hospital’s vehicle access. These involved new bus station, new roundabouts and new parking facilities.
As can be seen from the map, in 2007 there were 3 bus stops on either side of Hospital Road which is no longer present by 2010. Instead of that, we can see a new bus station situated on the west side of the Hospital road which is connected to two roundabouts; one of which is at the intersection of City Road and Hospital Road, while the second is at other end of Hospital Road, at the junction with the hospital ring road.
The two maps also show the changes that were made to the staff and public car park. In 2007, both visitors and staffs shared the same parking area which is on the east side of Hospital Road and accessed via the ring road. However, this ordinary parking places is designed for hospital’s employee only in 2010. A new parking area, situated in the East side the ring road, provided parking for members of public
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ation on the west side of hospital road.The bus station is accessed via 2 roundabou...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...unction with the hospital ring road. the maps also show the changes that were ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68472906404 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58169439773 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3619618435 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21318864784 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951117004769 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618576368778 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131283374304 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055328206992 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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