The map show the changes in the road accessing to the city hospital both in 2007 and 2010.
In 2007, the city road was running from the west to the east, with the city hospital in its north. This city hospital can be assessed via the hospital road which was from the north to the south, and the ring road surround this hospital. There were six bus stops in both sides of the hospital road, and the staff and public car park was located near the west bus stop.
Three years later, there had been some changes in this hospital. The biggest changes were the addition of two roundabouts. One was in the crossroad in the city road while the other one was in the main entrance of the hospital. Bus stops were combined and converted into one big bus station in the west side of the hospital road. The original car park had become the staff only one and a new bigger car park was laid in the east side of the city hospital which can be entered through the door in the ring road.
Overall, the city hospital had bigger bus station and car park to accommodate more people.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shows'.
Suggestion: shows
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...th the city hospital in its north. This city hospital can be assessed via the ho...
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...al can be assessed via the hospital road which was from the north to the south, a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...he staff and public car park was located near the west bus stop. Three year...
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...l car park had become the staff only one and a new bigger car park was laid in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38308457711 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00242421333 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432835820896 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213514714251 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110431998029 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10998817169 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187925478029 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132948903867 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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