The two maps illustrate changes that have taken place in an area from 1995 to the present.
The maps elucidate the alterations in the area between 1995 and the present. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable changes occurred for the size of green areas in the city.
To begin with the north part of the area, there were new additional housings and a new road, which have been developed in the place of housing in 1995, and new holiday homes, new golf course and new tennis course, which had replaced the presence of public park and farmland respectively in 1995. Furthermore, the existence of sport facilities and hotels had been changed by restaurants and bigger hotels respectively where there was a new car park which was built to the east of the hotels.
In accordance with the south of the town, there were new yatch, which was constructed in the east side of the sea, and new apartments, which were made in the place of fish market in 1995. According the other changes, coffee was relocated to the next of a new road in the opposite of hotels where the existence of fish boat had been erased in present time.
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- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people.Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 67
- Children today are too dependent on computer and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastime than spending all day indoors. 78
- Line graph : Clothing Export in 1999 - 2003 in Japan, Colombia and Myanmar. 78
- The following maps show the changes that have taken place in the centre of a town since 1700. 78
- Bar Chart : home and international students, 2010 – 2012. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5935828877 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44322415598 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9927532426 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.166666667 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157307964952 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999776050319 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871338232112 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129801955155 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732362023482 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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