University sports centre
Two provided maps indicate the present facilities of a sports centre of an university and its changes after some reconstructions.
It is clear that the university sports centre will have more spaces for other kinds of sport in the future. Additionally, most the central parts in this sports centre still remain according to the future plans.
In present, there is a room for gym in the north of university sports centre which will be expanded doubly to the east. Besides, the outdoor courts in the west of this sports centre is planned to be demolished in order to make way for a leisure pool in the upper left corner, a small changing room in the lower left corner and a sport shop in the left of reception.
Moreover, a 25m pool in the center and some facilities around it will still exist in the future plans.
Another outdoor courts in the east of the university sports centre will be replaced by a sports hall next to the seating and two studios for dancing. There will be a construction of another changing room in the lower right corner to sastify this demand of students. And a cafe will be built opposite the sports shop to provide the tasty drinks for students while conducting the physical activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...resent facilities of a sports centre of an university and its changes after some r...
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Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ity sports centre will be replaced by a sports hall next to the seating and two studio...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68837209302 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55405170217 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483720930233 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0766496343 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452986187468 0.215688989381 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225396772015 0.103423049105 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164458422739 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279749001381 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158025524309 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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