Water
The graph and table illustrate obviously the amount of water used worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
It is clear from the graph that the water that spent for Agriculture is high compared with Industrial and Domestic use and the demand of using water in all of them had an upward trend over the time of the survey. From the table, we can see Brazil using water per person outweighed Congo.
Over a period of 100 years, the water for agriculture always occupied highest position, increased dramatically from 500 km3 in 1900 to about 3000 km3 in 2000. The tendency of Industrial use and Domestic use from 1900 to 1950 was quite parallel and approximately 100 km3 and 80 km3, respectively. From 1950 onwards, the statistic for Industrial witnessed a significant rise to over 1000 km3 in 2000 while there was about 200 km3 increased in the number of Domestic waters.
With 176 million people and 26 500 km2 of the irrigated lands, a person living in Brazil consumed an average of 359 m3. Meanwhile, in the Congo, even though the population was less, but there was only 100km2 in the area of irrigated land and the water consumption per person was 8 m3.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71359223301 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62594438977 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9163766941 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27508667411 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146436249772 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135091842997 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218860832799 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138406430169 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.