I agree busineeses also have social responsibilities as well as make money. if corporate make more money,its because they have to pay taxes. Firm have a more care about the society. if they make more money, they will improve their business. so that the more number of people getting job.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: tintin711
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...responsibilities as well as make money. if corporate make more money,its because t...
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Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , its
...make money. if corporate make more money,its because they have to pay taxes. Firm ha...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ake money. if corporate make more money,its because they have to pay taxes. Firm ha...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...irm have a more care about the society. if they make more money, they will improve...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...oney, they will improve their business. so that the more number of people getting ...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oney, they will improve their business. so that the more number of people getting job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 3.0 33.7804878049 9% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 238.0 965.302439024 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 50.0 196.424390244 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.65914794847 3.73543355544 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62724189979 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 38.0 106.607317073 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.76 0.547539520022 139% => OK
syllable_count: 81.9 283.868780488 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.5155902777 43.030603864 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.6 112.824112599 42% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0 22.9334400587 44% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289007228683 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167075352257 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181465477089 0.0843802449381 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289007228683 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.85 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 40.7170731707 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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