What are the advantages and disadvantages of television?
television plays a vital role in modern Families. many believe that different tv programs can be useful. however, some content that a has negative effect in life. The peresent essay aims to discuss that the advantages of television outweigh its disadvantages.
it is generally admitted that television is beneficial for two main reasons. for one thing, televesion increases our knowledge of the outside world. For instance watching documentary programs help us understand many fields of study. Another thing is that television introduces us to different cultures. As an illustration, there are many of channels with different topics and they provides every all kind of information about people's lifestyle and cultures.
By contrast, there are several serious disadvantages to television. In the first place, watching television increases the weight of children day by day. An example may help clarify the point. children who View tv for a long time, they have no activity and eat more food while watching. In the second place, television causes poor concentration. All in all, television can be very harmful for who watch it for an average of six hours or more a day.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative aspects of television. I personally think that is upside is significantly more productive than its downside. To support my position, I would like to present to basic arguments. Firstly, Doctor Smith, the head of the psychological department at Harvard University assert that tv programs inform us from latest news and information. Therefore, television has an important part in awareness. it help us to communicate easily and live together. Secondly, the latest figures released by Islamic Republic news agency (IRNA)reflect that about 85 percent of tv programs are suitable for everyone. In other words, watching television provides us with a pleasant way to relax and spend our free time.
To sum up, it can be stated that television can increase quality of life. however, the question is: can television improve the health and happiness of a human being in general? only time will tell, but in the meantime, television will continue to influence every aspect of everyday life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, another thing, for instance, in general, kind of, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 965.302439024 193% => OK
No of words: 353.0 196.424390244 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26912181303 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96144712749 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 106.607317073 194% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586402266289 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 283.868780488 210% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 8.94146341463 291% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3102302725 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5384615385 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5769230769 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.23603664747 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189066342812 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513282693668 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572676444596 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105473045335 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403554648611 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 40.7170731707 238% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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