what should we do to be environment responsible
Nowadays, the development of the human world causes many bad effects on the environment. we throw garbage everywhere, exploit too many natural resources or contaminate the air. Therefore, our environment is being seriously polluted and we need to protect it.
First of all, we should reduce, reuse and recycle. instead of using plastic bags, we can use leaves to wrap food. we can recycle plastic bottles, cans, paper to reduce garbage. using public transports and decreasing the number of motorbikes and cars are also good ways to reduce carbonic in the air.
Besides, we should try without plastic. you may find it challenging to go without using plastic as it appears to exist in every single aspect of our lives. However, it isn’t as tricky as you are thinking. Taking a canvas bag along with you when you go shopping, buying fruits and vegetables lose, and not buying bottled water can even make much difference. if you try, you can find alternatives.
Last but not least, we need to Change our travel habits. Driving and flying are two areas where we can make a real impact through environmentally friendly practices. Choose fuel-efficient travel options, travel less, and try to pick more direct routes to save on fuel. if your office is near your home, try to ride a bicycle instead of a car.
Before us, the environment is an ideal place to live, so if we can do the things above, I think that it can return as it used.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78174603175 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62064345321 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7945526582 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8823529412 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187736593823 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579457074989 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725799189206 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103621340944 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484135960269 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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