Which sector requires financial support from the government , Health or education? support your point of view , with reasons and example from your own experience
In this essay, i will share my experience of the topic and share my opinion accordingly. To many people health sector is very important, but they failed to realize that the education sector needs the financial support from the government than health sector, for instance the education sector is where the doctors and nurses kicked start from before they can able to practice what they have learned, if the education sector is lacking financial aid ,i don't know how the health sector want to produce doctor and nurses, there is no any other sectors that needs the financial support most than the education sector.
In addition, education needs the financial support for the government to reduce illiteracy in many communities, in some communities you will some depilated schools without roofs and windows, even some student had to sit on the floor before they can receive lecture, which is unfriendly and it's hazardous to learning.
Conclusion, i will implore the government to support the education sector with the financial help , to create friendly environment for learning, which will encourage people to go to school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, even so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15846994536 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62575940946 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568306010929 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.393041723 43.030603864 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.0 112.824112599 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.75 22.9334400587 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314725359876 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156830104197 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102894696444 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198856258361 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790980975875 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.2329268293 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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