Which viewpoint do you agree with? Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives
Some people argue that advertising promotes people to buy stuff, which they do not really require. In my opinion, advertising is very useful to make people aware of things which they might need, and they don’t know about. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, Advertisements help people to buy things, which are essential, but people are not aware about them. For example, in my house, I have a big lawn with a large variety of trees, flowering plants. The flooring of the lawn is completely covered with grass. Every month, I must go through the very difficult task of levelling the grass by cutting it. Initially, I was using a manual cutter for the job. It takes me almost a day to do the job, and it also takes a heavy toll on my body for the next day. One day, I saw an advertisement about an automatic grass cutter, which works on electricity. The only requirement it has is someone should it from behind. I immediately ordered it, since then I have been using it for cutting grass on my lawn. This reduced a heavy burden for me.
Secondly, Advertisements make people aware of things, which improve the quality of life. For instance, I used to have a lot of devices with me. Each of the devices has its own charger brick and power cord, which I must always carry with me, whenever I go out to someplace. Once, I saw an advertisement about a universal charging hub, which can be useful for charging any device, and then I ordered it. I used it for quite some time. Now I don’t have to carry all the charging bricks with me all the time, which helped me to travel freely with less worry. Moreover, it helped me to buy less stuff, which helped me financially, as I need not spend money on things more often.
I conclusion, although sometimes Advertisements promotes people to buy stuff which they don’t really need, I strongly believe that Advertisements are mainly making people aware of the latest advancements, which are very useful to improve people’s standard of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 5.60731707317 892% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 965.302439024 174% => OK
No of words: 364.0 196.424390244 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62087912088 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64338255269 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 283.868780488 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5165422849 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0952380952 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.23603664747 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22650894405 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728357528436 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786505473508 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174210249821 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565438293138 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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