The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of average daily consumption on more than 4 rations of fruit and vegetables in 2 gender groups in the UK in 2006.
Overall, there was an upward trend in both figures at the age from 19-24 to 55-64, followed by a downward tendency in the age over 64. Another striking feature is that women ate fruit and produce more than the men in almost all age sorts surveyed.
In regard to the UK’s citizens at the age from 19 to 64, it is apparent that the 16% of 19 to 24- year-old female people consumed five or more fresh fruit & vegetables servings in 2006, which was 1% more than male’s figure in the same group. The women’s fraction rose dramatically by roughly 10% to 25% at the age 35-44 and reached the peak of well under 35% at the age 55-64, while the men’s figure at the same age was always 3% less than.
Moving on to residents who were 65 years old and more, the female’s percentage declined gradually by about 5% to 30%, with the male’s witnessing a downturn of the same fraction. In the group of people who were 75 years old, both fractions reached the same level of 25% in 2006.
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- The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41509433962 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38204507285 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9685270968 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251582708433 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126457513811 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841955765005 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161365255468 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630294688337 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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