Write an email to the restaurant’s manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things State what problem you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Rocio Smith and I am new around town. I have visited the Blackstone restaurant last Saturday with my husband and we were really impressed with the atmosphere, the decoration, and the live music played by the band. However, we were not as delighted by the food since it did not meet our expectations. I ordered a Rib-Eye steak and I asked for it to be medium-well cooked, instead I received a well-done Rib-Eye and it was really salty.
Soon after we tasted the food, we called the waiter to complain and the service he provided was awful. He was really impolite and did not want to change our order arguing that we did not specify the term of the meat. We inquired about you, but unfortunately you were not present at that time so we ended up paying and leaving.
It was really unfair as we paid $280 dollars for a meal that did not meet the quality standards we paid for. Please use this email as a formal complaint from us to you aiming to get a refund for the meal as compensation.
We look forward to your response to solve this matter.
Sincerely,
Rocio Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49504950495 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53237056846 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7426345973 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124492971672 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044964156174 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440496161714 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717546382638 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296349633399 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.