Dear Mieka,
I hope this letter finds you well, I am writing to let you know that have changed my job and started a new career at LTC technologies as a System engineer. As you are well aware that I was working in a small start up company near dublin and the salary is low when compared to my profession. So i was waiting for an opportunity to jump over the next level.
Luckily, I found this job advertisement on the newspaper and cleared the interviews. Now, I am very much delighted with my new role as a system engineer. Right now I am working on a second project for robotic limited. The project seems so complicated however I am very excited about it. I am working along side of the famous robotic engineers of the world, and I am really happy that I selected for this role.
Well, Me and Lisa planned to get married in the coming autumn. You knew I was dating her for nearly 2.5 years now. I want to settle down at last, I want you to come over here prior to a month to my marriage. So that we all hangout for trips and enjoy the few freedom days before the marriage.
See you soon,
Hyem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... low when compared to my profession. So i was waiting for an opportunity to jump ...
^
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
... am very excited about it. I am working along side of the famous robotic engineers of the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really, second, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24056603774 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39739144907 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3847736622 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1538461538 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947523575452 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320778444678 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434277396871 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063504941796 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489415980744 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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